NO! Not my title!!!

oh no!  I just googled "Written in the Stars" and it's like this rap song!  NOOO!!!
So, here are my options: let me know what you think:

• Fire and Dreams
• Let Go
• Let Me Go
• Never Give Up
• Secret of Our World
• A Little Place Called Keidreiy
• Ilori

I shall do my best to explain the idea of my plot in a paragraph.  Here goes:

Halyn has always been the invisible girl in Cast Haven, Minnesota, so when the boy she's had a crush on since 6th grade starts noticing her, she's delighted.  He's really nice and even invites her to join his band Kafele.  He calls her Ilori, his treasure.  Then Halyn's dad comes back.  He abandoned Halyn and her mom for another woman when Halyn was only 3.  He comes back and tells her that she is worthless, fat, and ugly, completely destroying any sense of self - confidence she has worked so hard to achieve. Esteban comes over to see why she missed practice, and they end up getting kidnapped by a shapeshifting ball of fire known as a Caelestis.  They are taken to Keidreiy, a place full of wonders and insane creatures, that they are to be king and queen of.  But when Halyn is forced to go back to Earth, ... 

I really can't do this!!!!!! I'm terrible at this stuff!
anyway...
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